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first meeting
Contributed by
merry
on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 09:42:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
InternetLove
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so far away
so near
dear ireland
not far you say
you fly in
now both
anxious
wondering
electric sparks
ignited by touch
weak knees
I want
need you
first embrace
trembling
in your arms
we already know
so much
exploring
forbidden
territory
sinful and delicious
trust
kissing
seals our fate
gmm 2004
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merry
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2004-03-07 21:42:07]
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Re: first meeting
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by Stitch on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 09:57:48 PM AEST
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Dear Merry,
How do you say so much with so few words?
I just love your stuff!
Stitch |
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Re: first meeting
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by Jessica_Saini on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 10:09:10 PM AEST
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Great poem. I'm in an internet relationship and can really relate to it.
~Jessica |
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Re: first meeting
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by Kie on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 10:58:51 PM AEST
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You know this does sound like a fairy tale and incredibly romantic and dreamy. *Envy*
In a way the internet is a new form of letter writing. In the old days people wrote letters and fell in love and now it is much faster thru the net.
It must be an amazing experience to touch the person the first time. What I really find remarkable is getting to know the inward first which is hard to do in real life.
Loved this one. Kie |
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Re: first meeting
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by Avarice_Riot on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 02:24:40 AM AEST
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| Aw, that's so sweet. I like that you're able to express so much in so few words. Take care. |
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Re: first meeting
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 03:35:42 AM AEST
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| Merry!@ OMG... Wow .... ooohhh sinful and delicious ... my every hope is with you gurl! .... hugs *daisies* Jan |
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Re: first meeting
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 08:48:13 PM AEST
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hehehehe Good luck ;o)
Roses for a naughty little daisy
Larry |
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Re: first meeting
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 03:48:59 AM AEST
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*long sigh...* been there, done that, got the t-shirt, ...but damn gaille, this makes me want to try again lmao! sexy hot whoo whoo:) hugs n' love daisyness,
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