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my nightmare
Contributed by
blaq_rose
on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 08:29:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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surrounded by the shadows
screaming
blinded by darkness
trying to fight the torture
bottled up
gonna burst
gotta get away
parents don't understand
they think i'm crazy
but they don't know
they don't care
mindless drones
zombifyed stature
stuck in a trance
so scared of the world around me
don't know what to do
the voices screaming
shouting orders
kill
hurt
pain
addiction
maybe i am crazy
but it won't matter soon
i'm drowning in my nightmare
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2004-03-07 20:29:04]
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Re: my nightmare
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 09:38:59 PM AEST
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"please comment" "Please comment" !!!!!
Have YOU ever commented on any other poet's work?
well here's your comment.
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Re: my nightmare
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 10:42:03 PM AEST
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| Great poem, sounds like my life. I liked how choppy the sentences were. |
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Re: my nightmare
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by Medieval_Enigma on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 12:29:34 AM AEST
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| I could relate to this poem a lot...great job |
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Re: my nightmare
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by Desi on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 04:26:29 PM AEST
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| very nice Jane, I liked it a lot. |
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