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Faulty Facts - An Ode to Mama
Contributed by
yellow_sundragon
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Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 04:29:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
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She tried to get you to tell the truth,
She just wanted you to come free.
So she could forgive you and love again,
But you decided not to let that be.
All her life you've hidden from her,
Denying her knowledge of the facts.
Throwing her into chaos and doubt,
As her very foundation cracks.
You clouded her eyes from birth,
Never showing her the real reality.
Changing the past with your own brush,
Painted in your petty brutality.
Never thought she'd learn the truth,
Never thought she'd see the light,
You say you love her, if you did you'd
let her go, instead you block her flight.
All you speak are filthy lies,
She tries and she tries,
But everything left is wrong,
And all her hope is gone.
~JM
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Re: Faulty Facts - An Ode to Mama
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 04:45:43 PM AEST
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| oooo! jaime your back! *yay!* and ~:*wow*:~ what a poem, i love it! so sadly beautiful, written in great style and flow too, you better stick around kiddo, ive really missed you!! big hugs n' love nessa x |
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Re: Faulty Facts - An Ode to Mama
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by Angelic_Demon on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 06:11:46 PM AEST
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Wow, Jaime, that was amazing. Great to at least see you around!
Love 'n hugs,
Mars |
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Re: Faulty Facts - An Ode to Mama
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by MoonlitAngel on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 09:39:30 PM AEST
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YAYYYYYYY you're posting again!!!!! *claps with joy*
Great poem, very sad. I haven't responded to your email yet, you know how I like to procrastinate... wait, I can't... I don't know your yahoo address... *hopes it's on your account page* But I must say, the hair sounds, um, interesting... lol
*chains Jamie to ypdc and magickally binds her to it* HEHEHEHEHE
~ Dee |
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Re: Faulty Facts - An Ode to Mama
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by SuicidalSon on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 09:08:25 AM AEST
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| I to am glad to see you back in action with another well written poem. I hope your not back just to stay one up on me though. I'll be posting something later to tie the score |
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