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My Friend
Contributed by
Elf
on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 04:24:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I sit
You scream.
thats the way
It's got to be.
I go up,
Into my room.
I think about
making news.
The hidden drawer;
I open up.
Load the barrel
Close it up.
On the trigger;
I place my hand.
Scared and angry,
Stiff I stand.
Place the pistol
To my head.
Prepare to fall
To the ground, dead.
Tense my body
for the shot.
Close my eyes
with all I've got.
Fall to the ground
Sobbing, crying.
Disbelief
I thought of dying.
I unload
My special friend,
to wait for the day
I'm angry again.
Exerpt from; Twisted Mind- The Diary Of A Suicide
Copyright ©
Elf
... [
2004-03-07 16:24:58]
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Re: My Friend
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by Whisper on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 04:40:08 PM AEST
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It gives me sense of being to that point at one time or another. Good clear senses I got the picture..
And that I have shared thoses senses you were feeling.
Whisper
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Re: My Friend
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by deathdrop on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 04:44:52 PM AEST
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| this is good stuff, and those short and snappy sentances really boost up what it's about. |
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Re: My Friend
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by spacecowgirl53023 on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 05:32:29 PM AEST
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| i have felt like that so many times, i understand that pain you feel. how it feels when you reall do have 'you special friend' in your hand... its terrible, but sometimes, you need that to realize what your doing, and what your losing. |
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Re: My Friend
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by gery_giggles on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 06:22:22 PM AEST
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i've done that very thing before and it hurts..i am not afraid of death but i made a promise to the only friend who tried to help me....i am much better now and i am glad u are to..stay strong!
luv always |
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