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Out With The Good, In With The Darker Side!

Contributed by deathdrop on Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 04:02:06 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief



well here i go,
unable to stop,
though in me are draining,
me, into a lifeless flop.

there is went,
i bet you can't find me now!
so when am i now?
up in kent?
paying rent?
living in a trent?
no...

i am falling,
into the dark,
consuming my fate,
setting my mark.

reaching within,
for my good side,
and throwing it away,
before it dissolves my pride.

turing in,
to a monster,
i don't care,
this pains to constant!

lashing out,
i must be stronger,
streching vast,
until my empire is longer.

fighting viscously,
at my prey,
destroying minds,
by the day!

forcing most,
to live in constant fear,
all those that upset me,
over those years.

becoming beyond help,
from all those that give it,
becoming true evil,
far beyond managing with it.

another victim,
another corpse,
another suicide,
another murder like force.

until one day,
when some one fights back,
resluts are tremendous,
but it was clear things would be black!

and then another fight,
cause life doesn't stop,
another argument,
another body dropped.

a raid of coppers,
with a warrnt looking fo me,
only to find another body,
only this time it is me!!

don't go thinking it's murder,
that's not the way it went!
true murders a terrible thing but,
suicide is better,instead!

cause you can choose your death,
and how things would work,
and when you're already being hunted down,
there's no other way, when you're already in the dirt!!!!




Copyright © deathdrop ... [ 2004-03-07 16:02:06]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Out With The Good, In With The Darker Side! (User Rating: 1 )
by Kellros on Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 04:04:59 PM AEST
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you are completely insane and i hate the poem...
NOT:P haha made me laugh for some unknown reason because somehow you try to make the best of things out of life... :)
funny & good write

~can't help if i find death funny~
:P


Re: Out With The Good, In With The Darker Side! (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 04:18:10 PM AEST
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I got lost in the poem a couple of times, wish you would check for spelling errors before posting.... Sorry




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