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Have you EVER?
Contributed by
kellros
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Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 03:25:17 PM in AEST
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Have you ever been stuck inside a world where you have what you want, but not what you need?
Have you ever lived a life where you hate, because no one cares?
Have you ever been stuck inside a life where, where you want someone to understand, but no ones listening...
Have you looked over your life and felt it was a lie, because everything thing is so material and no one cares...
Have you seen the light, just to find it isn't what it looks to be....
Have you noticed that hate doesn't help, just makes the pain worse
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Re: Have you EVER?
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by Jackee_line on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 03:37:03 PM AEST
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I can really relate to this poem. It is all so true.
Great write. |
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Re: Have you EVER?
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by Stitch on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 03:51:55 PM AEST
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Lots of true stuff here. Maybe it could be tightened up some to get to the heart of the matter more quickly. Just a thought.
Stitch |
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Re: Have you EVER?
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by ShadowDaughter on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 03:56:28 PM AEST
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Oooooh, I liked this one . . . quite a lot, to be honest. I love how you string it along, piece by piece, continuing and drawing it out and then . . . BOOM! You hit us with that great ending.
Highly commendable, I was impressed.
--Nora |
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Re: Have you EVER?
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by Whisper on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 04:50:38 PM AEST
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Good thoughts, provorking thoughts of passing. Look to the brighter side of life.Its there. .
Whisper. |
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Re: Have you EVER?
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by kidpoet_213 on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 09:29:33 PM AEST
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Yes I have... and I didn't like that side of my life... to much to deal with... too lil time!!! Hating is not the answer... this is true... it gets u nowhere fast...
Great poem... love it!
~Donna~ |
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Re: Have you EVER?
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by apollo on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 05:01:05 PM AEST
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| yes i have ,and wow how can i say that this was wonderfully put. beautiful! |
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Re: Have you EVER?
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by EmersonV on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 12:43:44 AM AEST
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damn... nothing but the truth.
cool write. |
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