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The River's Rising
Contributed by
faithmairee
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Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 07:25:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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can't stop the rain
no, i can't stop the rain
can't stop the rain
and the river's rising
bury the pain
gotta bury the pain
bury the pain
i can't see through the rain
gotta hold on
i just gotta hold on
gotta hold on
and the river's rising
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Re: The River's Rising
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by silent on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 08:23:21 AM AEST
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| simple and effective, nice work. |
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Re: The River's Rising
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by New_York_Chick on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 10:19:32 PM AEST
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your style is very unique
great write |
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Re: The River's Rising
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 10:27:32 PM AEST
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| wonderful, sad but lovely, it breathes:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: The River's Rising
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 04:16:54 AM AEST
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| simplistic means gets the point across the most |
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