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I'll be your angel
Contributed by
Cobalt
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Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 03:30:46 AM in AEST
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Take my hand
hold me tight.
I give you my life
if you'll stay by my side.
Give me your love and
I'll be your everything.
Would you show me
what it means to not fail?
Will you let me be weak
every once in a while?
Bring me a rose,
write me a letter,
or tap on my window
to say that you love me.
If you can do that
then I'll be your angel.
I'll always be with you
until the end of time.
Be my friend,
be my lover,
be my everything.
I'll be your angel,
your strength,
and the shoulder you cry on.
I'd love you forever
if you'll stay at my side.
Raven's Sin
Copyright ©
Cobalt
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2004-03-07 03:30:46]
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Re: I'll be your angel
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by arden on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 03:35:09 AM AEST
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nicely done. i really like this. good work.
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Re: I'll be your angel
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by MoonlitAngel on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 05:00:56 AM AEST
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Beautiful! I really like this one. Very sweet.
~ Moonlit |
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Re: I'll be your angel
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by faithmairee on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 06:14:52 AM AEST
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interesting poem...well done.
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Re: I'll be your angel
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by Kie on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 03:58:58 PM AEST
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| I found this to be romantic, loving, touching and kind. It would be beautiful in a hallmark card for a guy to use to propose or let someone know how special they are. I absolutely loved this one. I hope you can be an angel to someone and in return she will be an angel to you. Kie |
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Re: I'll be your angel
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 05:24:34 AM AEST
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| Oh god Cobalt. This was absolutely beautiful. It touched me very deeply. |
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Re: I'll be your angel
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 12:40:17 PM AEST
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| *sigh* so beautiful.... |
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Re: I'll be your angel
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by Kirby on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 09:28:30 PM AEST
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| Jeff, you are such a wonderful writer, I can't believe the passion and devotion you have in your heart. I'm marry you in a second if I lived next to you! Love::::Kirby |
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