|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
lost...
Contributed by
poemwritingdude
on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 03:09:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
|
the sun sets on this perfect day,
and the thoughts of you, they fade away
when I see you, I cant help but smile,
and want to stay with you for a while,
and then my thoughts return again,
and I dream of great things, remember when
there were no great troubles, pains, or fears
that could shed so many of these tears,
and yet I still dream of you nonstop,
and maybe I was only dreaming,
only dreaming...
Copyright ©
poemwritingdude
... [
2004-03-07 03:09:02]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: lost...
(User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 03:30:43 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
ALOTTA HEART! GREAT POEM!!
DAN!!! |
|
|
Re: lost...
(User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 08:07:07 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Love is so fickle isn't it?
Simply and sweetly written.
Stitch |
|
|
Re: lost...
(User Rating: 1 )
by SirensLight on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 06:05:04 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Reminds me of a few poems I have written in the past.. very well done... I hope you find Love again as I have. |
|
|
Re: lost...
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 10:55:58 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
These should be lyrics to a song.
Rita |
|
|
Re: lost...
(User Rating: 1 )
by kayald on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 10:32:25 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| I really liked this poem because its so bittersweet, and sometimes sweetness s overrated...this is just a good poem all around.. |
|
|
Re: lost...
(User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 04:58:44 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| ya go brando yu the best!!!!!!! u can beat anyone at poem battles hahaha |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
