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wrong
Contributed by
Chilibear
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Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 01:38:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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No stab through the heart comes close to what i feel.
No ocean could carry the amount of tears i've cried.
Maybe i was wrong.
Maybe you were right.
Maybe our fire,
Burnt out like a light.
An eclipse has come over the moon in my heart
I'm waiting for someone to pull me out of the dark.
I thought you'd be the one to click the flash in my eyes.
I guess i was wrong.
I guess you were right.
If you ever want me back, you'll know where to find me...
Sitting in the corner, with no one beside me.
Copyright ©
Chilibear
... [
2004-03-07 01:38:27]
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Re: wrong
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by Stalkee on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 01:43:02 AM AEST
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| oh wow...very sad and im very sorry...hope youll bounce back quick and be on your feet again |
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Re: wrong
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by perfection on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 01:43:33 AM AEST
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| That is really cute. I know that i have gone through it before. Just stay stong and you can get through it. |
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Re: wrong
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 03:56:06 PM AEST
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| awww! |
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Re: wrong
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by poemwritingdude on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 10:52:40 PM AEST
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| this poem is very good, i feel just how you do, and lets hope this pain gets away! |
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Re: wrong
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by whisper-of-night on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 11:45:12 PM AEST
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| oh dear! how sad... well, I wasn't there so I will not judge who is wrong from who is right, I just hope you will find that special someone to walk you out of that dark corner.....soon...... |
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Re: wrong
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by luckycharm on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 02:17:55 PM AEST
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| Chili, I like this poem so much. I can relate to it as well. It reminds me of me and my crush.-Pamela. |
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