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I Am Your Fears
Contributed by
WorthlesSanity666
on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 11:27:54 PM in AEST
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I am the problem that
haunts you forever.
I am the ***** that
causes you pain.
I am the visions you see at night
that make you want to scream.
I am the watcher that
drives you insane.
I sneak into your life
and make you miserable.
I am the one
who poisons your mind.
This is my work
and my life.
I love what I do.
Be aware of what's behind you...
Copyright ©
WorthlesSanity666
... [
2004-03-06 23:27:54]
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Re: I Am Your Fears
(User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 11:34:46 PM AEST
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| oooo Scary write. I loved it. Looking behind me now. LOL You did a great job. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: I Am Your Fears
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by Baronhawk on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 12:42:50 AM AEST
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| My fears indeed! A nice concept and a creepy execution. However it lacks perhaps that melodramatic and haunting edge...some rephrasing and perhaps substitution of metaphors could give birth to a truly terrifying monster. But nice work in all...and you may not want to heed my opinions as much as I am just human with pecularities and preassumptions. |
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