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Leaving This Cruel World
Contributed by
night_child
on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 06:13:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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You rubbed the salt
On my open wounds
The stinging
Still goes on
I can no longer find myself
Lost within this web of lies
Barely gripping
My reality
My life
The suns gone down
The darkness closes in
Paralyzed
Frozen in this moment
Living it again
Going through it in my head
Hearing every word you said
You said I was ugly
That I should be dead
So to my grave I walk
The end so near
The dead ground beneath
Forever the darkness stays
The knife glides across my skin
Slicing open my soul
Blood spills upon the floor
Lying in my grave
Goodbye sad life
No more am I yours
To torture
And to hurt
Goodbye
Copyright ©
night_child
... [
2004-03-06 18:13:36]
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Re: Leaving This Cruel World
(User Rating: 1 )
by WorthlesSanity666 on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 06:35:52 PM AEST
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| Great write! Gave me a good picture as I was reading it. I look forward to reading more from you! |
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Re: Leaving This Cruel World
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by Stalkee on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 11:12:45 PM AEST
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| this is sad...the world is cruel a lot of the time...but dont let go...just hold on, cause once you hit rock bottom, theres no where left to go but up...im still waitin to go up myself right now...if you wanna talk, pm me |
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