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Until Death Do I Cry
Contributed by
cklawson
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Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 04:44:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Didst I not grieve for beauty fell?
Once moved by whom I cannot tell
Songs of old and stories anew
Marked with life and told of you.
Tears of whispers for thou unseen
Removed from life, restored thou art be.
By words that pierce a devil's eye
Are kept within for I will cry
No rising sun or lover's touch
Would ever survive and mean this much
Plagued by this poison and loss of thee
Consumed am I from sight to see
Like a broken heart that bleeds within
I die with her who dies in sin
Copyright ©
cklawson
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2004-03-06 16:44:43]
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Re: Until Death Do I Cry
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by TwEeK on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 06:52:21 PM AEST
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nice! i like it its emotional its good!
Kinda Shakespearian but its all good ! |
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Re: Until Death Do I Cry
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by PumpkinPie on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 02:04:01 AM AEST
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Excellent poem ! I don't know what to say!Very impressive !! I can't believe ppl didn't post comments on this one,it's splendidI really think you have a beautiful talent in writing.Keep posting,I'll be sure to keep reading your poetry,
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