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Watching The Red
Contributed by
WannaDieCuzImEMO
on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 03:46:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I watch the red
and think of how
I want to be dead
right now
instead of seeing
myself bleeding
Slash, more droplets
Slice, more regrets
Deeper, and more deep
I know I'm going to keep
doing this some more
Until I'm on the floor
red, and white
here out of sight
I'll lay undiscovered
until I've recovered
and I will look sane
and not full of pain
Waiting till night
to be left alone to fight
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WannaDieCuzImEMO
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2004-03-06 15:46:26]
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Re: Watching The Red
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 03:52:58 PM AEST
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| Good write, I really liked the first stanza. Keep it up! |
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Re: Watching The Red
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 08:57:51 PM AEST
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| dont die write more poetry |
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Re: Watching The Red
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 09:57:10 PM AEST
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I knwo yhow your feeling I write a lot of cutting poems...and suicidal poems and you knwo ***** everyone who thinks we are freaks because we arent so w.e. I liked this write however but keep your head held high...
much love,
Dani |
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