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veterinarian poet
Contributed by
ladyfawn
on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 02:53:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
PetPoems
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help me help me doctor,
i've been shot straight thru my heart,
i need a man who loves me,
and won't tear my world apart,
dr. doolittle where are you?
i know you look for me as well,
read my poetry, get to know me,
people ungraced by animals live in hell,
i do not need a mercedes,
well made fences make me smile,
so all our animals can frolic,
and i won't worry for a while,
there would be no question,
animals our sisters and brothers,
life would be in true harmony,
were we to love one another,
when we go to bed at night,
dogtails wagging, knowing we care,
man who wants to hold me tight,
bed big enough for all to share,
friends say you're out there,
you are not just a dream,
a man loving, caring, kind, real,
who understands how i feel,
so i write you this little poem,
if you're out there somewhere,
i'd really be your perfect mate,
my soulful wish i hope you hear,
i need you veterinarian,
who loves animals like me,
who has a loving hearted view,
who helps the living be,
help me help me doctor,
i've been shot straight thru my heart,
i need a man who loves all creatures,
and won't tear their world apart,
i do not want to live alone,
and i suspect nor do you,
sew my heart up with catgut,
save me or euthanize me,
no, i do not need riches,
but i do need your honesty,
dear veterinarian write me,
our lives would be poetry.
,-._,-.
/)"(/
(_o_)
>^,,^<
Copyright ©
ladyfawn
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2004-03-06 14:53:14] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: veterinarian poet
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kie on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 03:11:41 PM AEST (User
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Awww Ness ((Hugs))
He is out there! Who knows between the two of you, you both might make an animal reserve for animals that need love. You just never know. When he finds you he will know that real gems shine and should be cherished for the treasure they are. I bet he's looking for you and asking himself the same questions! Loved your poem. Kie |
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Re: veterinarian poet
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 03:37:04 PM AEST (User
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Awww hun this is beautiful! well written and it flows wonderfully.
He is out there and if he reads your poem, he'll smile and click the PM button thingy. you have a big heart...its only fair for you to share it with someone
Love 'n Hugs
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Re: veterinarian poet
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 03:51:39 PM AEST (User
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that was really heartfelt good powerful poetry.
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Re: veterinarian poet
(User Rating: 1 ) by Whisper on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 04:02:49 PM AEST (User
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nice read
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Re: veterinarian poet
(User Rating: 1 ) by Merry on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 04:10:10 PM AEST (User
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oh yeah the perfect soulmate for you would definitely have to love animals. great write nessa, and who knows maybe a vet will be on here reading poetry because he has a broken heart too - kismet -
merry |
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Re: veterinarian poet
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 05:51:58 PM AEST (User
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Nessa, this is great! I think that would be a perfect solution for you. A few hundred acres, you and the vet and plenty of animals to love and love back. Scenario works for me.
hugs n rainbows,
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Re: veterinarian poet
(User Rating: 1 ) by DreamWeaver on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 06:33:45 PM AEST (User
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I love your sense of humour Nessa, and I hope you catch your vet with this one! :)))) sounds puurrrfect, woof woof, Jan |
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Re: veterinarian poet
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 06:48:51 PM AEST (User
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Awww Ness..I love this!!!! It is very cute.. I do hope our resident vet sees it and responds.. :>)
Hugs and woofies....
Jenni |
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Re: veterinarian poet
(User Rating: 1 ) by LOWMAN613 on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 09:05:32 PM AEST (User
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Cute poem Nessa,I hope for it to be true!
Loved this! Christina |
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Re: veterinarian poet
(User Rating: 1 ) by Cynthia on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 10:39:35 PM AEST (User
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Awww, Nessa, what a beautiful write. I liked this alot. You'll find your mate. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: veterinarian poet
(User Rating: 1 ) by Stalkee on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 12:43:30 AM AEST (User
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keep waiting, keep looking, youll find him...i know you will...great write, i enjoyed it |
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Re: veterinarian poet
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 02:53:26 PM AEST (User
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I thought ya just got rid of Dr Do Little.... hehehe...ok ok that was bad......I loved this Nessa. ;o)
Roses
Larry |
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Re: veterinarian poet
(User Rating: 1 ) by yellow_sundragon on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 04:35:03 PM AEST (User
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It's SOOO good Lady!! I love it! It's soo cute too... and I love the cat(?) at the end...
Great write!!
*J* |
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Re: veterinarian poet
(User Rating: 1 ) by twinkletoes on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 07:42:07 PM AEST (User
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nice ditty, good luck with the woofing plea!
tt |
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Re: veterinarian poet
(User Rating: 1 ) by venkat on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 01:17:21 AM AEST (User
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Hi my Lady fawn..I love all creatures..but I am a very lazy fellow..ha ha ha..lovely write.. truthful.. heart felt..sicerely..with best wishes. your friend. venkat |
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Re: veterinarian poet
(User Rating: 1 ) by New_York_Chick on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 09:33:18 PM AEST (User
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thnx a lot for commenting on my poetry!!
i really like this poem, it's just really refreshing to read a poem that's different in some way, that stands out
great write |
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Re: veterinarian poet
(User Rating: 1 ) by PumpkinPie on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 12:49:45 AM AEST (User
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One word: WOW....I can't believe how much we ressemble each other.I love pets so so much,and I told myself I would marry a man that loves my bunny as much as I do.Or any pets for that matter,but mostly my bunny,she's so special to me:) And this poem is kinda weird to me considering I'm studying to be admitted into vet school,I'll find you a keeper when I'm there,hehe..Great great poem dear friend!
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Re: veterinarian poet
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 11:50:35 PM AEST (User
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Nessa, he is out there somewhere. Just keep your faith. I hope all goes well for you my dear friend. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: veterinarian poet
(User Rating: 1 ) by jaeann on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 01:53:21 AM AEST (User
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better than any profile posted on any "dating" site around......he's there...... |
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Re: veterinarian poet
(User Rating: 1 ) by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 29th December 2005 @ 12:58:04 PM AEST (User
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Awwwwww Nessa!! I love this, but that 'euthanize' part made me sad: (
Animals mean the world to me, and I love this special poem you wrote! I'm actually hoping to adopt a second dog shortly...I currently have a dog and a cat, but wish I could have umpteen more: )
Scorp.
(Who isn't a Vet Assistant for nothing!) |
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