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Beginnings & Ends
Contributed by
morelikelyrics
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Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 02:28:38 PM in AEST
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Golden roads always have an end,
Clear blue skies seem to darken,
Shiny new cars get scratches,
And this heart of mine gets broken...
Its doesnt take much to tear it,
But nothing you do will heal it,
This love has an end,
This love has its cloudy days,
But wait till love fails you again...
Give it time,
And fresh milk spoils,
Its with my life,
You have toiled,
Give it an hour,
And now my love's gone sour...
Its doesnt take much to tear it,
But nothing you do will heal it,
This love has an end,
This love has its cloudy days,
Another day, another month, for love to fail...
Good songs have sad lyrics,
Good days recall bad memories,
And its this heart that ticks,
This heart that isnt free,
That sets apart, you and me.
You tore it,
You broke it,
And now you're gonna pay...
Love fails another day,
Love fails another day.
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2004-03-06 14:28:38]
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Re: Beginnings & Ends
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by Whisper on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 04:12:17 PM AEST
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Interesting - prehap if I could picture a tune to match the words too.
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Re: Beginnings & Ends
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by Bandit2 on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 10:00:25 PM AEST
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Has some structural problems but definitely has potential!
You can feel the emotion in your words and that is something you want and usually find in a good song. Polish it up some and you may have a hit on your hands.... just set it to music and see how it evolves. |
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