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Can you see the light?
Contributed by
kellros
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Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 02:21:02 PM in AEST
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Can you see the light,
reflecting from raindrops falling from the sky,
can you see the light,
shining out of my eyes
can you see the light,
to define between the lies,
can you see the light,
or do you not even mind?
Do you know when it is the right time for something...
do you know how to get up when you have nothing...
Do you dig your own grave with senseless questions...
have you ever bothered to try and answer some of them...
Is there an answer you really seek, or are you asking a question to get an answer you want...
are you incontrol of life, or does life control you?
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kellros
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2004-03-06 14:21:02]
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Re: Can you see the light?
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by lil_angel on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 02:58:22 PM AEST
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Re: Can you see the light?
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by kidpoet_213 on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 11:53:21 PM AEST
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Sounds like something I would write...
lol
Great write ...Loved it!
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Re: Can you see the light?
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 10:05:06 AM AEST
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Interesting thoughts. Love the reflection of raindrops line.
Stitch |
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