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The Journey
Contributed by
Lone_er
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Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 12:34:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The Journey
Abandoned in a barren land
Without dignity heart in hand
Desperate to find a way
Fearing nevermore to hear her say
“Come dance in Angels light”
“ Come laugh with me tonight”
“Come search wonders of the heart”
“ Come let joy ne’er depart”
Hands trembling my soul does flutter
Giving voice to heart I hear it utter
“ Why did you tear me out ?”
“ What’s my offense” in agony I shout !
Without a glance she walks away
These few words I hear her say
“ Nothing has been done or said”
“ It’s just over love is dead”
So now I journey every day
With broken heart along the way
Wondering why life cannot be
Simply happy and heartache free !
Russ
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Re: The Journey
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 01:00:01 PM AEST
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Realy well written.
I like this alot.
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Re: The Journey
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 01:09:50 PM AEST
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dearest russ,
love these lines:
"Abandoned in a barren land
Without dignity, heart in hand"
they drew me right in, beautifully written, always love your creative style, and flow,
...i have wondered these same things too, nothing less than genuine will do, i hope you are soon happy and heartache free, my friend, for you deserve that and so much more:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: The Journey
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by emystar on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 06:18:59 PM AEST
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Wow now this is a masterpeice!
U have this flare about your writing that gives it that extra touch to make it come alive as we read. It's hard to put it in words but I'm sure other writers can see it too.
Great job here!
U must be picking someone elses vibes to write such an awesome write and it not be your life.
Luv it.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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