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Split Personality
Contributed by
LouisaMontagu
on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 12:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Tributes
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Here we go a second time round
Singing your praises, I havent found
I cherished you, I chose to adore
You make me feel like a dirty hoar
I wrote for you, Feelings so deep
Typed on the internet for you to keep
Said you would change, But its all Lies
The tears have returned to flood my eyes
You've pushed for the Line, u know Love n hate
I wish i had walked on our very first date
You Drive me crazy Im bloody mad
Now im numb to this word SAD
You jarr my head get out my face
get out of my life and give me some space
They see through u, my friends hate you
Its funny u know i think i do too
You cant hack ur drink You dont even try
then you take drugs to get you your high
I was your high if you'd let me be
You changed so much im breakin free
Its my birhday weekend you ruined my night
embarrased me then started a fight
you promised AGAIN we'd go for a meal
then phoned up drunk, do u know how i feel
Out with the lads come on baby girl..!!
Its gone,, everything has gone.......
Copyright ©
LouisaMontagu
... [
2004-03-06 12:00:00]
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Re: Split Personality
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 01:26:47 PM AEST
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powerful and well written, nice flow.
well done.
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Re: Split Personality
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 10:38:07 PM AEST
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Wow...I loved this.... written with so much emotion......
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Re: Split Personality
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by Elipsis on
Friday, 22nd May 2009 @ 03:25:51 AM AEST
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| I was in a really good mood until I read this poem... Now I too am angry, hurt and feeling betrayed... Very good poem!!!! |
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