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What's The Point?
Contributed by
starlight_dancer
on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 06:51:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Sadness never ending
Is that meant to be right?
Stuck all the time,
In the depths of a dark cold night.
All the time, troubles to face,
Closing up around us,
Nothing, no space.
Run away, run away from problems
But why? Whats the point?
Tears rolling down her cheak,
Words don't seem enough to speak.
Nothing left, life so bleak.
Once there was a flame,
A light burning in inside,
Nothing now,
Problems catch us out, you can't hide.
So many long awaited years
Still nothing, just more tears.
What's the point in all of this?
Just crawl back into that dark abyss
Copyright ©
starlight_dancer
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2004-03-06 06:51:34]
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Re: What's The Point?
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 06:55:12 AM AEST
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That's so sad, really. I have felt like that so much in my life, for long periods of time. Hope that feeling has waned, I really do.
Enchanting write, very deep and emotional. Excellently done.
Love always,
-Dan |
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Re: What's The Point?
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by deathdrop on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 07:17:05 AM AEST
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| really good, like it it. well done. |
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Re: What's The Point?
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 12:56:13 PM AEST
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| expressed amazingly and deeply... i feel like you can read my thoughts. |
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