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GoodBye
Contributed by
marshiee
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Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 02:10:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Our time has finally ended
Our dimming flame faded
There is no more need
For any sort of speech
When we first met
Everyone said it would not work
We wanted to prove them wrong
To make them eat their words
We drifted into a world
Of continuous make believe
Thinking constant quarreling
Lead to better understanding
Years passed and our bubble burst
Casual talking was no longer a must
We turned round and round
As if in a rotating kaleidescope
We tried to end our love
We tried to walk away
But no matter what happened
Our bond forced us to stay
As dishonesty and doubt
Clouded our almost dead hearts
We knew this had to end
We knew we had to part
Maybe our love was just
And experience we have in life
Maybe when we part
We'll feel so relieved inside
While our relationship has gone
As ashes blown in the wind
You will always be special
Always be unforgettable
For you have shown me much
And encouraged me to be better
To hold my head high
When people make me cry
You are the most loving person
I have ever met
And ending our love
Is truly truly sad
But it is for the better
This decision we made
And I will never regret loving you
Nor will the memories ever fade
So let's not cry
For with this last poem to you
I bid you..goodbye....
Copyright ©
marshiee
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2004-03-06 02:10:56]
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Re: GoodBye
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 02:19:51 AM AEST
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Awww..this is so beautifully touching....
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Re: GoodBye
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by Fionndruinne on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 02:23:32 AM AEST
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Beautiful poem. I can feel the grief in it. I too know the pain of trying to beat the odds and failing. Sometimes it feels like things never happen like they do in the stories. But don't despair! When your time comes along, it will be worth it.
Take care.
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Re: GoodBye
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by Lone_er on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 09:54:01 AM AEST
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| I see the evolving of love in your words. The recognition love never dies, it just changes. So well written and a model for us all...Wisdom is worthy of its children...Goodluck...Russ |
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Re: GoodBye
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 12:43:24 AM AEST
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| Thanks for the encouraging comments.. and taking the time to read my poetry... =) |
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