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The Fourth Rose
Contributed by
kidpoet_213
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Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 11:29:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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On my Birthday this year...
I received three gifts...
All as special as those who had given them
Three single roses were given to me
Given with love from the heart...
One single rose from each niece
Amanda's rose was a red rose bud
So beautiful... ah... it was
The deepest shade of red... I had ever seen
It was given with such love from her heart to me
Jennifer's rose was a yellow rose
So beautiful... it stood so straight... so tall
It, too, was given with love for her "Aunt Don Don"
Kayliegh's rose was a pink rose
So beautiful it has stayed
But I know that in time, it , too, will die
It's just an inevitable thing
And it, too, was given with love from her heart to mine
The fourth rose...?
I would love to receive...
From a very special niece...
I'm sure when she finds the time and can...
She'll buy me that single rose... my heart imagines
It will be as beautiful as she ...
And will be given with more love than my heart can ever fathom
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Re: The Fourth Rose
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 01:09:09 AM AEST
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What a beautifully touching poem. Isn't it sad their beauty can't last forever. But it will in your mind. The fourth rose I feel will come. This is an excellent piece of work.
rainbows,
Rita |
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Re: The Fourth Rose
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 03:25:24 PM AEST
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| may their fragrance ever be in your mind, petals sweet as the day they were given to you, beautiful loving poem:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: The Fourth Rose
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by Cynthia on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 11:03:22 PM AEST
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| Awww, Donna, this is such a beautiful write. I hope you get that fourth rose you so wish for. *S* Cynthia |
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