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Away From All The Things I've Once Known

Contributed by WannaDieCuzImEMO on Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 08:39:06 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I once sat beneath the stars
I was away from all the cars
away from all of the things
That I have once known

if I tried i couldve flown
and i was all alone
Watching the stars shine
I almost felt fine
But then i thought of you
and how we were of two
not one anymore
and i knew what was in store

I picked up the gun
the one we had jest in fun
to kill one
or the other
if we'd fought
or been caught
not loving one another

I put it to my head
and I knew I'd be dead
Next I pulled the trigger
and now you can figure
what happened next

It's all for the best
Because now I can rest
Away from all of the things
That I've once known

Copyright © WannaDieCuzImEMO ... [ 2004-03-05 20:39:06]
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Re: Away From All The Things I've Once Known (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 09:20:00 PM AEST
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this poem reflects many of my friends' lives and once did mine. i lost a friend to suicide and have 4 more who are seeking help for it now. one of them is over a girl that he's madly in love with. i used to be like that, i lost a guy that i thought was my whole world and luckily my friends knew how i felt and helped me or i wouldnt be here today. im doing everything i can to help my friends now. i know what you're saying in that poem and i love it cuz i can relate, i think many ppl can. more ppl need to put it into words like u did and hopefully they can get help becuz that's not the way to go.

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