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What I See In You
Contributed by
samsonpete
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Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 07:54:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Remember how things used to be
Forget how things are now,
I know you don't want to hurt me
And yet you seem to know just how.
It kills me to see this side of you
I feel you aren't being true,
I've seen you be so great
but don't worry, I get the clue.
I still wonder what's your true side
The caring, awesome, sweet guy
That genuinely stood by my side
never wanting to say goodbye.
are you really this opposite person?
Who doesn't care what anyone thinks,
Always trying to play the tough guy
doesn't realize how much that stinks.
I wish you'd see what I see
Past mistakes are in the past
our typical old behaviors
are just not suppost to last.
One thing I see when I look at you
and I know you disagree,
People want to be like you
you are a leader, can't you see.
I hope that you'll discover
What I have seen in you
You're a genuinely good person
And I'm glad that I had you.
Copyright ©
samsonpete
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2004-03-05 19:54:18]
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Re: What I See In You
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by CountryGirl on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 08:07:20 PM AEST
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| Great job! People always change. |
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Re: What I See In You
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by New_York_Chick on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 08:21:11 PM AEST
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| beatiful poem |
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Re: What I See In You
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by jbrow on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 08:40:16 PM AEST
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I love this one it would make a great song
good job
p's
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Re: What I See In You
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by whisper-of-night on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 12:07:24 AM AEST
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| a very nice poem spoken of truth, I like it a lot.... well, you know, people always changes, or may be, he do it in purpose for un-known reason, or may be, he just want some attention and try to be different? Whichever way, if you really cares, then speak to him and see what you can find out...... |
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Re: What I See In You
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by samsonpete on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 12:43:12 PM AEST
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| thanks for your comments, this is my first 'real' attempt at poetry and to know it isn't awful is great. Thanks for all your advice too!!! |
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