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QUESTION BEFOR GIVEN IN.
Contributed by
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
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Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 06:21:22 PM in AEST
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Ten question a women should ask a man befor giving in to his charms.
i know some of you won't agree,but here me please.
i am a man and i would ask these same question to a woman.
so let me know what you think.pick one please.
Do you believe in God ?YES ,NO.
what is your plan for the future? agree or disagree.
Do you have a job?yes, no.
Do you own your own home? yes, no.
are you teachable? yes no.
what is it that you love about me?you decide on his respone ,if it physcial its not enought.
no touching with out asking?yes no.
what part of the world are you from?
Ask him about his family.do research on him.
tell him what will not happen?no sex befor mariage.
if he can answer all of these question.Then you tell him to come back after you talk to your father which is in heaven.
To find out what he as to say about him to you.
a real man can wait,if he's for real.comment if you LIKE.
SOME TIME WE CAN AVOID PROBLEM BEFOR IT HAPPEN.
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Re: QUESTION BEFOR GIVEN IN.
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by Magnolia on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 07:36:21 PM AEST
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| hi richard. i think that i'd like to comment on your work, but i don't want to be offensive or anything, so just know that criticism isn't a negative thing. i think that this would work better as something aside from a poem. poems don't have rules, i know, but this doesn't have any sort of beat, nothing flows. it's more of a poll or a checklist. poetry is art, and it seems that you've created something of a guideline for couples who would rather be free and live thier lives and relationships as they choose to. also, you can reply to this question if you'd like, i'm very curious of what you mean by the question, "are you teachable?"? taught of what? |
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Re: QUESTION BEFOR GIVEN IN.
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 10:16:00 PM AEST
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Do you own your own home? Are you teachable? First off, most women would like to be in on the process of purchasing the home she will probably live in forever. Teachable sounds like he is going to be sent to obedience school and given a treat and a pat on the head. I think that is a little condescending to a man. I agree with 50% of your questions, but I would turn and run the other way if someone started interrogating me like that. These are things you learn about each other as you gradually build toward an engagement or lifetime committment.
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Re: QUESTION BEFOR GIVEN IN.
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by emystar on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 12:52:51 AM AEST
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2 each his own.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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