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Forsaken
Contributed by
SkYYBLu
on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 06:08:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Hope fades.
Darkness reigns.
Souls create their own acceptance.
Among the lost I am forsaken.
Forever chasing fantasies.
Tears be my satisfaction.
Hearts are broken.
Faith has fallen.
Fate is howling endlessly.
Tormented by life's plea.
I must turn away.
Our hearts,
A bubblemakers dream.
I endure this life in constant sorrow.
Forever haunted
By shadows of a fallen destiny.
Copyright ©
SkYYBLu
... [
2004-03-05 18:08:44]
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Re: Forsaken
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by sicknivesevered on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 06:14:12 PM AEST
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| I felt as if I was staggering through the piece, as if I truly were forsaken. Groovtastic. |
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Re: Forsaken
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by neglected1 on
Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 04:36:40 PM AEST
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i really like your writing ... your words just go so nicely together.. you fit things perfectly.. great write..
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