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Fight for sleep
Contributed by
SirensLight
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Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 05:58:06 PM in AEST
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Like a mist slowly surrounding
Here the sandman has found me
Though the sun is in the sky
I long to dream away and fly
My body fights against my will
As voices call out asking if I'm okay
But I can barely hear them today
As my will trys to state its case
Working to try and stay awake
My body falls into a relaxed state
And I barely notice it
As the world seems to fade
Somehow my body has one
Without me knowing that the battle was done
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2004-03-05 17:58:06]
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Re: Fight for sleep
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by sicknivesevered on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 06:18:06 PM AEST
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| Great poem. I fall asleep all the time in class. I make sure I use at least three out of the seven as nap time. =P Anyway, you capture the comfort of dozing off well. |
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Re: Fight for sleep
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by CountryGirl on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 08:05:13 PM AEST
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| Maybe not in class but when work is slow and boring. Sleep seems to overcome everything. |
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Re: Fight for sleep
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by Archie on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 12:21:02 PM AEST
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| I think this poem is cool. It is a good spurring to us to get proper sleep at night |
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