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Don't Give Up
Contributed by
thuginchiq
on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 04:59:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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If you love someone let them know don't hesitate
Cuz next time you go to tell them, it might be too late
Don't hide what you're feeling inside
tell them how you feel
Cuz you'll hate yourself
if you never tell them how you feel
Don't be shy, just let it fly, let it outta you
Cuz you never know
they could feel the same way too
If they're with someone, it won't last forever
they could end up with you
Just keep trying
and if you love them you will wait
Don't give up on what your heart tells you
Don't give up on what you believe is true
There is such thing as love at first sight
You just gotta know when the feeling is right
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thuginchiq
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2004-03-05 16:59:32]
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Re: Don't Give Up
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by sicknivesevered on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 06:35:29 PM AEST
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| Wow, that was awfully perky. Kind of cheered me up to the next level. However since I'm in the "love doesn't exist cause all girls are whores" phase right now, it wasn't too potent. All together though, great write. |
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Re: Don't Give Up
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by LornyaNarFuinenya on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 07:10:08 PM AEST
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| that was really touching, becasue i feel like giving up , he already knows and doesnt feel the same maybe i should but thanks you cheered me up a bit NICE WRITE!! |
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Re: Don't Give Up
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by CountryGirl on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 08:27:06 PM AEST
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| This is so true. The love at first sight I believe very much. It has happened to me and I think I may have found my true love. |
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