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WHAT THE HELL
Contributed by
PRECIOUSBECKY
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Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 04:38:10 PM in AEST
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WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON
WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG
I CAN'T ESCAPE THIS EVERLASTING HEARTBREAK
I CAN'T GAIN CONTROL YOU SAY YOUMLOVE ME BUT IT JUST DOESN'T SHOW
THESE FEELINGS ARE WEIGHING ME DOWN, THIS HAS TO BE TRUE LOVE THAT I'VE FOUND- BUT WE CAN'T GET IT TOGETHER MAN- NO MATTER HOW MUCH IN LOVE I AM.
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2004-03-05 16:38:10] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: WHAT THE HELL
(User Rating: 1 ) by sicknivesevered on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 06:44:14 PM AEST (User
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OH MY GOD, WHAT IS WRONG
WHY IS YOUR CAPS LOCK KEY ON SO LONG
THIS POEM WAS LIKE A PUNCH IN THE FACE
IT SHREDDED ALL THOUGHTS OF LOVE AND LACE
BUT IF THATS THE IMAGE THAT YOU WENT FOR
THEN GREAT JOB, THE TITLE WAS QUITE A LURE!
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