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Here's My Heart
Contributed by
Solmyr1404
on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 03:26:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Here's my heart,
Finish breaking it,
So then maybe I can live my life
Without you;
So I can go to bed
Without crying at night,
Wondering what did I do wrong?
Didn't I love you enough?
Wasn't I a gentleman?
Didn't I take you in my arms
And say how much I love you?
Didn't I watch my mouth for you?
Didn't I mind my manners
And do anything for you?
What did I do wrong?
Why am I crying again tonight?
Why am I still in love with you,
Missing you?
Here's my heart,
Finish breaking it
So I won't have to love you
Anymore.
Copyright ©
Solmyr1404
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2004-03-05 15:26:27]
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Re: Here's My Heart
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by fallensilence on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 03:34:35 PM AEST
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| awesome poem. i know exactly where you're coming from -david |
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Re: Here's My Heart
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by MrWrite on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 03:37:29 PM AEST
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| This is a very powerful poem. I also know where you're coming from on this, so it struck pretty close to home. |
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Re: Here's My Heart
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by Kie on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 03:48:41 PM AEST
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| This poem made me cry. Very powerful to raw wounds. I loved your poem. Kie |
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Re: Here's My Heart
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by loveisendless on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 04:17:00 PM AEST
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ALOT OF FEELING,WITH LOTS OF HEART! I
LIKE THE WAY YOU WROTE THIS-REALLY NICE!!
DAN!!! |
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Re: Here's My Heart
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by poetrygodslove on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 04:41:54 PM AEST
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| AWEE want to say so much.. know how it feels to do all you can to please and they act like they didnt even notice and then get mad at you over the same thing they do.. life is hard. i loved your poem. memories came flowing back to me.. how it hurts to love someone and they act like they do one moment and then the next they dont.. roller coaster ride i call it.. Here is a hug for ya... hope you have great day.. and i will say this to... sometimes we have problems and as we think about them the problems get bigger but in reality we thought wrong... take a look at my song i wrote .. .DONT LEAN ON YOUR OWN UNDERSTANDING.. about page 10 ,11 or 12 ok... sandy |
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