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F.U.

Contributed by SuicidalSon on Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 09:58:31 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief

Upon a stake, Upon a cross
Its our mistake that Jesus lost
Is it fate, or is it not
He did create for us to rot

One more time for all of you
I write in rhyme of what is true
Jesus died, and we will to
So have some pride and say God F.U.

What you want, you will not get
Your prayers a front that you'll regret
Hes on the hunt, His mind is set
That your His grunt You will repent

What to do, Live or die
Is He true or just a lie
No one knew, I made them cry
They said F.U., I said God will try

I can not believe this
I have opened my eyes
Why no one can see it
Comes as no surprise
You all have been blinded
You are part of the lies
You are who He despited
You are the reason of Christ

Can you beleive this?
Can you open your eyes?
Now can you see it?
Can you all realize?
That Hes really not needed
At all in our lives
Its just a book and you read it
Theres no God in the skies

Jesus Christ said save yourself
Or when you die you'll burn in Hell
My reply is save ourselves
Cause when we die we get no help

Copyright © SuicidalSon ... [ 2004-03-05 09:58:31]
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Re: F.U. (User Rating: 1 )
by doug on Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 10:16:26 AM AEST
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i dont really agree with your poem but i support your right to say whatever you feel.
keep up the good work. your friend doug

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