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Dear YOU
Contributed by
des
on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 05:20:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Dear You
It was hard when I was little
With a dad who’s just like you
When your heart is just so brittle
I wish you only knew
I see myself in your son's eyes
As I call you on the phone
I say my last goodbyes
Do you wonder if I feel alone
One giant tear on my cheek
As more messages I leave
Why don’t you want to speak
Don’t you wonder why I grieve
For you, I hope you play
Those messages I spoke
I said “Mom I love you” today
And really it’s no joke
Everyday I wonder what I did
For you to leave me here
Remember mom that I am your only kid
And in my heart you left a spear
I know you have a car
You have cell phone too
I don’t know where you are
But you know my love is true
I am a boy and yes I am tough
That is what I am supposed to be
But God calls me by my bluff
Why is it only him that can see
Please mommy take my glasses
And see what I conceive
I see as my whole life passes
With a mom that don’t believe
Copyright ©
des
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2004-03-05 05:20:43]
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Re: Dear YOU
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by venkat on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 06:54:09 AM AEST
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"Remember mom that I am your only kid
And in my heart you left a spear"..very strong line..very touching poem.. venkat
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Re: Dear YOU
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by loopylou on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 10:52:54 AM AEST
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| aw sad i hope things get better for you, i really like your style of writting |
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Re: Dear YOU
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 03:27:42 PM AEST
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| i know how you feel if this poem is true
for some reason my mom always thinks that
I want some thing when i tell her i love her.
so great poem!!!! i look forward to seeing more of your work!!!! AMBER HOTTENSTEIN
:) |
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