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To Live a Life to Live
Contributed by
Wolfchild
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Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 03:27:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
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To live a life to live,
I've never lived this life,
I want to live a life to live,
My life is gone I live no life.
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Wolfchild
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2004-03-05 03:27:33] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: To Live a Life to Live
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 01:36:10 PM AEST (User
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Emotional poem. I especially like the way you (intentionally?) recanted a hopeful, positive message through the last word of each line.
Short, but interesting. |
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