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THE DRUG
Contributed by
redwest802
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Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 02:36:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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She gently caresses your mind,
Body,
Soul.
Giving you a euphoria of existence.
Her presence soothes you,
But she causes you pain.
You must have her,
You must!!!
She has captured your true being,
Giving you the essence of life.
An excuse to continue,
In your mundane, misconstrued mortality
You know she is evil incarnate,
But you love her.
She has destroyed you,
But, no she has saved you.
She is your heroine
She is heroin
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Re: THE DRUG
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by Asatru on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 04:59:27 PM AEST
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| Great message and nice write. |
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Re: THE DRUG
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by Deathly_Rose on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 06:07:42 PM AEST
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wow... truely a great write! it shows the pains of different people...
it shows the impact that a single perosn can have on you
Great write
keep up the great work
*~Alicia~* |
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by CaddishCut on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 07:17:02 PM AEST
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| This is the drug I struggled with for a while, and it eventually took the life of my best friend, so this one means alot to me. Thank you |
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Re: THE DRUG
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by SharonAngel on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 05:08:22 PM AEST
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| so true is this write...how you captured the feelings of how a person on this drug much struggle is greatness...good work...keep it up. |
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Re: THE DRUG
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by waos on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 09:10:56 PM AEST
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wow, good...
good. i know i know, not descriptive, but it's true.
nice write, good message.
~waos |
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Re: THE DRUG
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by Solnubis on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 10:08:33 PM AEST
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This drug took the life of my brother at a young age and this describes perfectly how he felt about that drug. Because to have been clean for over 6 years and to go back to it it must have to him seem his hero his way out of the trouble he felt he was in.
There are also many other types of substances out there that will make you feel like this too and i also felt that in your poem. |
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Re: THE DRUG
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 03:43:21 AM AEST
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| wow... this is amazing |
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Re: THE DRUG
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by inoc on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 11:28:42 PM AEST
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A brilliant write on such a addictive drug
Inoc |
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Re: THE DRUG
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by Scarlett on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 09:12:31 AM AEST
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amazing, short and simple but full of truth. if drugs were beds this drugs would be a four poster water bed with massage feature. the nicest feelings have the costliest price. so well expressed, the shortness of this poem adds to the punch it packs.
well done x |
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by Live2Die on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 04:24:41 PM AEST
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| I just....wow. This perfectly describes the struggle one would go thru. Amazing. |
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Re: THE DRUG
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by PuppyChow on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 02:45:00 PM AEST
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nice wording- it really describes it.
keep writing!!!
-hannah |
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Re: THE DRUG
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by candysears on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 09:20:36 PM AEST
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Great message
Blessing |
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by bttrflynajar on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 02:43:45 PM AEST
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you captured the feeling so well....
im speechless...
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by suicidal_imbecile on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 11:51:03 AM AEST
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personally i have never done herion, but i am a drug addict in many different ways. this poem had two meanings. it can either talk about the battling of a drug addiction or on the other hand love. think about it, read this poem with a women in mind and not herion. so true, awsome awsome awsome write.
kate |
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Re: THE DRUG
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by Dusty on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 05:48:02 PM AEST
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Perfection, Utter Perfection!
Dusty |
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Re: THE DRUG
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by guiltycircles on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 08:33:58 AM AEST
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| wow what an amazing way to capture the hold of drugs...well done |
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by kerrah681 on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 12:43:28 PM AEST
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| Wow, cool, i like alcohol and drug poetry, type in exactly that,"alcohol and drug poetry" in your yahoo search and scroll down to the alchol and drug poetry headliner, its a ntework54 site by sassy cajun, its got awesome related style poetry like the need for speed, lady heroine and sum other excellent ones.....But yeah I dug this one you wrote...cool |
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by Channing on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 03:15:54 PM AEST
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| Great poem about the struggle with addiction, nice work! |
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by Sae on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 08:59:57 PM AEST
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| Good job! |
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Re: THE DRUG
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by sleepykisser on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 08:37:31 AM AEST
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| very powerful |
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by classicfailedhero on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 06:08:37 AM AEST
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| hey pretty good but not my type, actualy it was pretty dull |
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Re: THE DRUG
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by ginnginn11 on
Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 04:31:41 PM AEST
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i love this poem it's got a really nice tone to it...
~Toots~ |
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Re: THE DRUG
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by DarkFaerie on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 12:35:16 PM AEST
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| Very powerful write, shows the draw that drugs have. Simply amazing. : ) |
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by Marly on
Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 04:11:57 PM AEST
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| I've struggled with this drug for 2 years, and i probably will forever. She's the only one who understands, she is my heroine |
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Re: THE DRUG
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by rapnificent on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 08:53:24 AM AEST
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| Now that was tight! |
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by The_View on
Friday, 5th January 2007 @ 05:35:35 PM AEST
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| Love the double meaning. |
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th March 2007 @ 08:36:22 PM AEST
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| This gives a reader an excellent view on what drugs mean to the user(Not that Im accusing you of being one!) Excellent job! |
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by BurnedRose on
Thursday, 22nd November 2007 @ 08:48:29 AM AEST
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| wow! that was amazing! |
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Re: THE DRUG
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by franciswolf on
Tuesday, 13th May 2008 @ 05:53:25 PM AEST
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| o.k. |
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Re: THE DRUG
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by ShaonKra on
Monday, 23rd February 2009 @ 03:09:42 PM AEST
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| powerful poetry |
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Re: THE DRUG
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by HERO on
Tuesday, 17th March 2009 @ 05:05:22 PM AEST
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| In my opinion, this isn't poetry...poetic...yes, very very poetic, but poetry? I'd disagree, poetry should rhyme, this is a passage. And remember folks, this is MY OPINION...no one need another YouTube.... |
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Re: THE DRUG
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 11th May 2009 @ 07:52:03 PM AEST
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| thank you for putting it into words. |
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Re: THE DRUG
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by Inevitable on
Friday, 5th June 2009 @ 09:38:39 AM AEST
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As I was reading this, before i got to the end I was thinking,
Hmm...this seems like a metaphor for heroin.
and it seems that it is.
The closest I've gotten to that
is a line of OC.
Good write
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Re: THE DRUG
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by simonwrite on
Tuesday, 3rd November 2009 @ 10:35:05 AM AEST
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yeah man. ive struggled with addiction. its no joke, but there is some deep pools u can dive into from it when it comes to writing
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Re: THE DRUG
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by laststarontheleft on
Monday, 16th November 2009 @ 06:16:42 AM AEST
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Wow! This is truly powerful writing.
Thankyou for sharing it x x x |
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Re: THE DRUG
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by satanssecret1369 on
Wednesday, 16th December 2009 @ 09:43:20 AM AEST
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| Amazing. |
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