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Hold On
Contributed by
stalkee
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Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 12:21:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Today everything was dark
And I'm, I'm hanging from a ledge
I'm feeling weak, I'm letting go
And no one will catch me
I'm feeling heavy,
this weight is murder
I can't take this pain
But I know I gotta hold on,
for just a little longer
That's the beauty of hitting rock bottom,
there's no where left to go but up
So I gotta hold on,
at least to see tomorrow
Tonight, my mind was full of death
And I, I can not sleep at all
I'm so alert it's almost scary
I'm ready to cut loose from life
And lately, I've begun to cloak
Been hiding away from everyone,
Trying to get alone
And I know I gotta hold on,
for just a little longer
I'm in a dark tunnel of my life,
I know somethings on the other side
So I gotta hold on,
just to see tomorrow
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stalkee
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2004-03-05 00:21:58]
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Re: Hold On
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by PumpkinPie on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 12:28:03 AM AEST
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Yes indeed,hold on stalkee,after the storm comes the sun.There are many days filled with delight and love yet to settle in your heart and in your life.I liked reading this,nice work,
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Re: Hold On
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 01:04:13 AM AEST
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There is light at the end of the dark tunnel. The angst will not last forever. The sun will shine again and the warmth will be worth all the cold and dark you are going through.
Rainbows to you,
Rita |
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Re: Hold On
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by venkat on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 01:29:09 AM AEST
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| I agree with comment of Rita..it is a nice poem. venkat |
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Re: Hold On
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 10:14:58 AM AEST
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| good write Stalkee... yes that's all anyone can do... hold on and don't let go... :) |
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Re: Hold On
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 11:27:52 PM AEST
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| yes, do hang on, you are a very special person to me, your poem makes me worry, you know im here, big hugs n' love nessa |
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