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Hourglasses
Contributed by
WannaDieCuzImEMO
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Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 11:08:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Hourglasses, hourglasses
the past is fading fast
the future's yet to be
the present is falling
always, always falling
no one hears me calling
no one sees my pain
it's a dark, stormy day
inside this hourglass
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WannaDieCuzImEMO
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2004-03-04 23:08:07]
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Re: Hourglasses
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by arden on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 11:14:19 PM AEST
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short and really good. i like this. great write i look forward to more.
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Re: Hourglasses
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 12:02:39 AM AEST
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hehe...love your name. love the poem too..
welcome to YPDC
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Re: Hourglasses
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by WannaDieCuzImEMO on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 12:18:02 AM AEST
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thanks, this is actually my favorite poem i've written i hope to keep posting more id like to read all of the dark and sad poetry out there. as long as its good ;^ )
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Re: Hourglasses
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 10:00:49 PM AEST
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hah I must say I like your name also only cuz Im EMO...lol I love emo well anyways I must agree this is a very good write sometimes the shortest ones get out the most feelings in just the little words it uses...
much love,
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