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Poetry?
Contributed by
forever_lonely
on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 10:00:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Running through the calls and words
Soaring with the bees and birds
Crawling across a moonlit wall
Bouncing questions, like a ball
Set in stone these words of motion, carry me into my ocean
Spring bring love, and offspring near
Summers heat, and silent fear
Autumns death, dormant trees
Winters breath, a floating breeze
Watching as these seasons pass, sitting in tall trees and grass
Raining hard, the droplets fall
Water flows at natures call
Fluid are these feeling fast
Rivers dance and show the past
Rain cant be without water, like a war without the slaughter
Written here these words of ink
Pages where the thoughtless think
Books of riddles, and rhymes the same
Stories where the pens to blame
The page is where the talents read, it flows from where the poet bled.
Copyright ©
forever_lonely
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2004-03-04 22:00:51]
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Re: Poetry?
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by kayald on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 10:09:42 PM AEST
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| i really liked this poem...the way you used the words and rhyme made it really come alive. It moved me and was so deep and insightful....awesome work |
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Re: Poetry?
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by kayald on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 10:10:36 PM AEST
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| i really liked this poem...the way you used the words and rhyme made it really come alive. It moved me and was so deep and insightful....awesome work |
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Re: Poetry?
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by desireemiote on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 10:16:28 PM AEST
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I love this...You really captured the thoughts, meaning, and emotion of writing poetry. Plus you did it with rhyming and without being corny about it. Awesome work. Great job. I hope to read more five star poems from you in the future.
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Re: Poetry?
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by blueheart on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 10:20:16 PM AEST
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| Lovely poem. I especially liked the last line, it was awesome. Truly something we all can relate to. |
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Re: Poetry?
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by arden on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 10:23:03 PM AEST
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this was soo beautiful. i love the rhymeing. wow wonderfully done.
Arden |
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Re: Poetry?
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 07:58:21 AM AEST
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I have always wanted to write a poem about poetry, but was never able to capture it like you have here. This is full of creativity and talent, a true joy to read.
Truly,
-V.S. |
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Re: Poetry?
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by Stitch on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 08:12:15 AM AEST
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Raining hard, the droplets fall
Water flows at natures call
Fluid are these feeling fast
Rivers dance and show the past
It's all good, but this is my favorite stanza, and the third line of this is my favorite line.
Love that!
Stitch |
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Re: Poetry?
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by doug on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 11:08:13 AM AEST
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autumns death ,dormant trees
winters breath, a floating breeze
my favorite lines are these
give us more please
really great poem. your friend doug |
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Re: Poetry?
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 11:46:35 AM AEST
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This should be the poets theme song. Flawless poetry, but i have come to expect no less from you my friend.
Very well done.
Larry |
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Re: Poetry?
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 01:04:30 PM AEST
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omg!! an amazingly beautiful breathtaking poem!! i have chills! thanx a lot luke lol, this is truely *stunning!!! your last line so true; it stopped my heart:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Poetry?
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by Empty_Soul on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 09:14:11 AM AEST
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very nice dude, very nice. i like ur style here, nice experimentation (spell check lol) and it worked so well.
keep on fighting
never stop writing
John |
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Re: Poetry?
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 04:11:43 PM AEST
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| very good write... it takes a lot to write about poetry and you did it so well. |
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