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My Heart's Fire
Contributed by
Froggy
on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 08:49:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Striking a match,
A candle is lit,
Watching it burn,
My heart will commit.
A flame without heat,
Is like a life without love,
Through my flame,
A burn is done.
Watch it flicker,
Feel hearts beat,
The silent laughter,
The sound of feet.
the flame knows,
Only what you show it,
our hearts grow,
We're the only one to know it
Copyright ©
Froggy
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2004-03-04 20:49:36]
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Re: My Heart's Fire
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 09:07:41 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC...the best poetry site on the net!!
Lovely use of metaphors here.. I especially love this line....
"A flame without heat,
Is like a life without love"
Jenni
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Re: My Heart's Fire
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 04:57:19 PM AEST
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| very creative, keep writin' ..warm welcome to ypdc too! hugs n' love nessa |
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