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Forsaken
Contributed by
hope420
on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 08:32:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Memories undaunted
Running rampant through my dreams
Endlessly reminding me
Of my eternity
Doomed to always walk this road
Of darkness all alone
Wandering forever
But never knowing where
All alone
Silence all consuming
No hope its gone
The world has forsaken me
Theres chaos all around me
Anger echoes through the night
So tired of the pain that burns
Inside my empty heart
I scream to the shadows
Noone answers my call
My torment immortalized
By my suicide
All alone
Silence all consuming
No hope its gone
The world has forsaken me
All alone
The world has forsaken me
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hope420
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2004-03-04 20:32:49]
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Re: Forsaken
(User Rating: 1 )
by WorthlesSanity666 on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 09:42:49 PM AEST
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| Great write. The words created crisp images in my mind. It was filled with emotion, I liked that. Hope to read more from you! |
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Re: Forsaken
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by Crash on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 11:19:00 AM AEST
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| Your words, and the way you use them, invoke emotions and thoughts, both of pain and sorrow |
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