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messed up
Contributed by
lostinmyself
on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 06:28:42 PM in AEST
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i have to get out of this mess,
feelings messed up,
head full of stress,
feeling unwanted, stupid, loveless,
no-body here,
only me left.
stuck in a shallow pit of your lies,
tell me somebody,
how can i survive?
surrounded by sadness,
too sad to cry,
i dont want to quit,
but ive already died.
cant i go back to yesterday...
when i felt like i was alive...?
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2004-03-04 18:28:42]
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Re: messed up
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by Remy on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 06:32:34 PM AEST
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what do i think... i think that darkness reigns in this write, and that you'll want to expand some new territory like HAPPYNESS!! joking... good write! ;0)
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Re: messed up
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 07:02:25 PM AEST
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| Wonderful poem! The first few lines reminded me of a song that Linkin Park wrote. (That's a good thing) I like how emotional your poem was. You have a lot of talent. I think you speak for many people. Good job, hang in there! |
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Re: messed up
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by lostchild on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 08:02:55 PM AEST
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| I think you've put into darkly beautiful words what a lot of people struggle to say........ nicely done! |
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