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Just Let Me...
Contributed by
afraid_of_fear
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Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 06:15:22 PM in AEST
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Let me fall from these visions that insanity brings
Let me murder the crows that fly madly within my mind
Let me have the courage to walk away from this hurt
Let me find strength enough to smudge away the world
Wondering if things will ever change
I stumble to my knees once more
Crying, i beg for someone to care
Yet knowing i'm not worth any of it
Let me scream so loud the voices are deafened
Let me bleed myself dry so i cannot hurt anymore
Let me open my eyes and face, and conquer my fear
Let me freeze this pain and leave it to thaw
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Re: Just Let Me...
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by arden on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 06:20:49 PM AEST
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i love it i love it i love it :D
everyone should comment when they read this lol it rocks charlotte!! great job.
your friend
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Re: Just Let Me...
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 06:36:47 PM AEST
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The form is interesting. I like the last stanza best. The last two lines are wrenching. Love the imagery of freezing and thawing fear.
Nice write.
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Re: Just Let Me...
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by Whisper on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 09:38:03 PM AEST
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Wow... it left me speechless
Peace
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Re: Just Let Me...
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by blueheart on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 10:28:07 PM AEST
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Charlotte,
A brilliant write you've constructed here, so dark and oozing with emotion. Truly a great write.
And many thanks for commenting on my poems.
~Hanna |
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Re: Just Let Me...
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 03:45:16 PM AEST
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Hey Char i liked this the imagery in this was amazing. I loved it all, but for some reason the first line sticks out the most. Keep up the writing...
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