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Flows From Me
Contributed by
Elf
on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 06:13:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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A crimson river,
full of life,
from my body
floods my sight.
My mind goes numb,
my body; slack.
The will to live,
I do lack.
My eyes still see,
but I am blind
to all around me
to all mankind.
My ears still hear,
but I am deaf
to all the words,
save the call of Death.
My voice is caught
as I try to scream
in pain, in anger
of all I see.
Then all is black,
nothing to hear,
nothing to live for
nothing here.
I awake to find
you above me,
tending my wounds.
Only you love me.
But still a crimson river
flowing full of life,
flows so quickly from me
Completely floods my sight.
Copyright ©
Elf
... [
2004-03-04 18:13:55]
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Re: Flows From Me
(User Rating: 1 )
by Elf on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 06:15:38 PM AEST
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Even though I had one that loved me, I still cut. If it was just to "get rid of stress" or whatever. I still did it. I still love him though. Now he loves me even more that I've stopped. I stopped for him.
-*Valen*- |
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Re: Flows From Me
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by Nessa_Lee on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 06:16:25 PM AEST
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| Good write! Keep it up! |
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Re: Flows From Me
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by SpazzyMcGlee on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 06:17:10 PM AEST
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| I liked it. I could almost feel what you were feeling...you're very talented. |
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