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Liquid Pain
Contributed by
Elf
on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 06:03:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Grasp the blade.
A steady hand.
No intent displayed
to die; just as I planned.
A stinging pain,
quick to numb.
This comatose state
has struck me dumb.
This liquid pain
flows from me.
Red and black
is all I see.
From red and black,
to naught I see.
This liquid pain
flows from me.
Copyright ©
Elf
... [
2004-03-04 18:03:35]
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Re: Liquid Pain
(User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 06:05:13 PM AEST
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I can imagine this scrawled with a pen on a wall... oi, chilling!! good writing!! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Liquid Pain
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by Nessa_Lee on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 06:13:09 PM AEST
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| I liked how this was written! Good job! Keep it up, I think it's something that would be good to publish! |
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