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Routine
Contributed by
Elf
on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 05:58:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Every day
A set routine
Every day the same.
Cutting, stinging
Flowing, bleeding
All of this I feel.
First the knife,
in my hand,
steady as I go.
Then the sweet
taste of pain
as it bites into my flesh.
Next the numbing feeling
that sweeps over me,
as I sink to the floor.
Then the red
that fills my sight
mingled with the black.
Next the black takes over
my sight, leaving me
blind and empty.
Last I wake, to find me
in this world again.
Then the routine begins again.
Exerpt From; Twisted Mind-- Diary Of A Suicide
Copyright ©
Elf
... [
2004-03-04 17:58:18]
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Re: Routine
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by Remy on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 06:00:52 PM AEST
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not you, but just thinking - can't you only be suicidal once? i mean to really succeed in being a true sucidal... ah, never mind. good write ya got here. hope that book takes you places!! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Routine
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by Nessa_Lee on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 06:14:45 PM AEST
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| I could definately relate to this...great job! |
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Re: Routine
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by Lionel on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 06:16:09 PM AEST
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| A twisted mind indeed. |
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Re: Routine
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 06:32:18 PM AEST
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interesting book might be worth a read......
wildejohnny. |
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