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Face in the Mirror

Contributed by alecfernadez on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 05:10:50 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



Everytime I look into the mirror,
I see the reflection of a dick,
A lost soul, a dying fire
Its enough to make me sick

An abused stereotype,
An ugly potrayl of insanity,
I try to cut it out,
But the scars always fade

I see this lost and lonly child,
Who cant seem to find his way,
Cant put the past behind him,
Emotional baggage seems to stay

I want it to leave,
To die and bleed,
Suffocate myself,
In my dreams

I wish I could turn back time,
Stop all those mistakes,
Stop all these ugly visions,
Kill myself to stop the past

Because it hurts so much,
I bleed so much,
It never goes away

I hate myself,
I cant control

I want a perfect mind,
A perfect life,
Perfect Body,
A perfect soul

But all I have is this image,
Of a stupid kid,
Who made the same mistakes,
Who believed in a thing called trust,
Who believed in good in all,
How I hate,
This face in this mirror
Its time to end it,
Cut out this wasted life




Copyright © alecfernadez ... [ 2004-03-04 17:10:50]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Face in the Mirror (User Rating: 1 )
by Putteragain on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 05:13:46 PM AEST
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such sadness and pain what else can i say
and this is no joke
I love you

michelle


Re: Face in the Mirror (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 05:14:22 PM AEST
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oh that you would love thyself, you would find it SOOO much easier to enjoy the confines of the bathroom and every other mirror around you!! lol, good good writing... i like it! ;0)
~Remy~


Re: Face in the Mirror (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 05:16:02 PM AEST
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Hmn. I hope you don't end it, else we won't get any more poetry like this! Seriously though - no-one's perfect. Get used to it. I have.
By the way of uncanny coincedence - I've posted a similar observation not minutes before.
Very evocative and personal read, this was. 4 stars.


Re: Face in the Mirror (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 06:14:18 PM AEST
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beautiful expression of feelings, i am here if you want to talk, big hugs n' big love nessa
oldengmastiff@hotmail.com


Re: Face in the Mirror (User Rating: 1 )
by SpazzyMcGlee on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 06:24:27 PM AEST
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nice poem. kinda reminds me of some of the stuff i write. its really pretty. i think you're a talented person.


Re: Face in the Mirror (User Rating: 1 )
by WorthlesSanity666 on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 10:36:02 PM AEST
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Great poem. It felt... I dunno... like you made the emotions come alive. It was really amazing. I hope to read lots more from you.




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