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AWESOME
Contributed by
Lionel
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Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 05:08:01 PM in AEST
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I'm in awe. Leaves falling, reflecting points of light,
as a sunset sky is flaring just before the night.
Gold bordered clouds stream across the horizon blue;
masterful artwork displayed just for me and you.
Beauty in such rarity, unique in its kind.
Never the same again, given just one time.
Magnificence slowly yealds, fading in peacful flight,
leaving me in wonder, giving way to night.
What a great blessing God has given me,
a thankful heart to enjoy, and opened eyes to see,
the artwork of His mighty hand in the sky each day,
bringing pleasure, without measure to His sons of clay.
!sa. 45:7 " I form the light and create darkness: I make peace and create evil: I the Lord do all these things."
Lionel
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Lionel
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Re: AWESOME
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by Remy on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 05:10:04 PM AEST
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forget justice, the imagery in your writing paints an exquisite display all the same!! i love it! ;0)
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by Putteragain on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 05:20:47 PM AEST
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i wish i could have seen it sounds like you have a beautiful view
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Re: AWESOME
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 05:49:52 PM AEST
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AWESOME
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 06:18:33 PM AEST
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| beautiful....... youve done a veryyy good job; although like you said seeing it in person... how to write about it!? ill never forget the prettiest sunsett i ever saw either, i was on the ocean in a plane, ill never forget............ hugs n' love nessa |
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by twinkletoes on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 07:03:01 PM AEST
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a special moment shared with us all, very nice...
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Re: AWESOME
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 07:24:28 PM AEST
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Absolute beauty, Lionel. This is a masterpiece! Your imagery is perfect.
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Re: AWESOME
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by Whisper on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 09:18:21 PM AEST
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Nice Lionel. I love your choice of words.
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Re: AWESOME
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 10:02:22 PM AEST
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Oh Lionel,
I love this! I had written something like this, and I have never posted it here, but I'm going to now. I so enjoy reading your work, and they way you praise God.
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Re: AWESOME
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by buchi on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 11:29:02 AM AEST
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| Not everybody count their blessings!! Your poem is amazing esp :a thankful heart to enjoy, and opened eyes to see... |
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Re: AWESOME
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 07:54:17 AM AEST
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I echo the last few commenters. You are given the great gift of appreciation of the marvellous gifts the Lord bestows on us.
- and you do it with exquisite words.
Gratitude and the gift of appreciation are themselves a wonderful gift of God
You have it!
Bless you Lionel
Love and peace
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