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Powder
Contributed by
Exodus-On-Life
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Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 04:00:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Gunshot wound straight to your head
Self-inflicted misery found you broken, dead
There's still tomorrow
Forget all of your sorrow
Bleeding hands will fight
Crashing stars wreck the night
Bloody footsteps curse your floor
No excuse for a loss, close the door
There's still tomorrow
Forget all of your sorrow
Bleeding hands will fight
Crashing stars wreck the night
Curled up crying, laugh at my pleas
Powder stains your scalp and you fall to your knees
There's still tomorrow
Forget all of your sorrow
Bleeding hands will fight
Crashing stars wreck the night
You submitted to it's evil will
You've left a world that loves you even still
There's still tomorrow
Forget all of your sorrow
Bleeding hands will fight
Crashing stars wreck the night
Falling faster as we lose more time
This falls so much faster than I did with mine
There will always be tomorrow
Forget all of that tragic sorrow
Bleeding hands will always fight
Crash the stars as we wreck this awful night
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Re: Powder
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by Remy on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 04:09:04 PM AEST
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dark and dreary, the mundane repition of sorrow is befitting to suicide... superb writing! ;0)
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Re: Powder
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by wyrd_faerie on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 04:02:07 PM AEST
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| oh, this is so beautiful...so sad...amazing... |
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