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soul searching
Contributed by
tashban
on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 02:35:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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Love is an ocean we cannot part
Its tides of emotion revealing our hearts.
Beaching our sorrows , washing away
casting forth more to continue our day
What makes a soul relinquish its woes?
Sending out ripples to humble its foes
Is it the endless riding the waves of despair
Or the guiding of currents that bring us to bare
To seek out our depths of our soulful abyss
To journey our oceans for the ones that we miss.
Discover the calm on the ocean you dwell
For your loved ones are among you do not dispel
They guide and protect you through storms of unease
And send you their love in a form of a breeze
So soft and gentle yet so silently still
They are always around you……..
Just reach out and feel.
Copyright ©
tashban
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2004-03-04 14:35:59]
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Re: soul searching
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by Remy on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 03:15:08 PM AEST
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Ocean... plus feeling... ooo, i love the imagery in this! good writing! ;0)
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Re: soul searching
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 03:55:53 PM AEST
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Beautiful write, Tash...Great to see you finally posting....
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Re: soul searching
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 10:07:23 PM AEST
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well done another good 'un!
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Re: soul searching
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by MrWrite on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 03:29:31 PM AEST
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Wonderful imagery. Your emotions were very clearly conveyed with this. Well done.
Sincerely,
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