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Dear Dad

Contributed by jc_92024 on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 02:20:52 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



Dear dad,

Take a look around you
Don’t you see that I’m no their
Haven’t you noticed I’m missing
Or maybe you just don’t care

Don’t you feel a hollow hole
Where your missing son should go
I’ve been sit here so patiently
Awaiting your hello

I can’t take it anymore
Not having a father by my side
And you act like I’m gone forever
Like I was never there like I never cried

Well you wrong I’m here to stay
To be strong forever
I’m here without you and your advice
Knowing ill be better






Copyright © jc_92024 ... [ 2004-03-04 14:20:52]
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Re: Dear Dad (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 03:18:23 PM AEST
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The strength in this speaks volumes... glad you wrote this, thanks for sharing it! ;0)
~Remy~


Re: Dear Dad (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 03:50:11 PM AEST
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Really touching...
(Don’t you see that I’m no their..should read
I'm not there)..Just an observation....
Jenni


Re: Dear Dad (User Rating: 1 )
by Juggalette_chick666pk on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 11:36:31 PM AEST
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Hey I can relate to your poem so much, I wish my dad was here more often..well hang in there okay?




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