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portrait of lovers
Contributed by
merry
on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 01:14:30 PM in AEST
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painting the truth in different colors
subtle shades, pastels
muted by expressions
favored in the soft light
wanting to make a good impression
limited edition
a fresh canvas awaits
a pallette of life
the tangled limbs
in my minds eye
waiting for
the first brush stroke
stained with imperfection
what color is attraction
affection, passion
warm colors poured
over eager flesh
with joyous laughter
the beginning of a masterpiece
gmm 2004
Copyright ©
merry
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2004-03-04 13:14:30]
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Re: portrait of lovers
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by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 01:28:49 PM AEST
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| GREAT WRITE |
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Re: portrait of lovers
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 01:30:49 PM AEST
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wow, gaille, stunning, beautiful, breathtakingly awesome poem:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: portrait of lovers
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 02:24:30 PM AEST
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yes yes yes!!......thats exactly how it is Gaille.
You have such an insight into life it amazes me.
Very well done
Roses
Larry |
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Re: portrait of lovers
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by Kie on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 02:31:22 PM AEST
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| This poem brought a drum beat of excitement to my heart. Dang, it sounds awesome.... Kie |
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Re: portrait of lovers
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 04:51:22 PM AEST
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| love this, this is amazing. |
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Re: portrait of lovers
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 10:20:36 PM AEST
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This made me go "Ohhh." LOVE the last line.
Stitch |
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Re: portrait of lovers
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by arden on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 04:34:31 PM AEST
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wow awesome write! i really love this. great job!
Arden |
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Re: portrait of lovers
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by FallenAngel300 on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 04:32:02 PM AEST
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| wow... thats all i have to say, wow! amazing, i love this line "stained with imperfection". so are u an artist to? |
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